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SDL battle page 1 by ~Akina-SA:iconAkina-SA:

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ok page one ready to go!
i don't exactly like this one to be honest but at least it's starting with the story which is a good thing.
your turn now Lisa

and if anyone can tell me what the kanji is i'll do up something for them.

Dimidium (c) mine
Lisa Flashcat(c) *LisaCat89

page 1: on direct page
page 2:[link]
page 3:[link]
page 4:[link]

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~Exonence Jan 14, 2008, 12:24:29 AM
The "Can't girls aren't permitted." speech bubble looks like it's meant for the last panel. You should avoid letting the bubbles cross the panels, it generally ruins the smooth flow of the comic.
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*LisaCat89 Jan 14, 2008, 1:50:29 AM
oh oen thing! i am not wearing my katars all the time~ also the helmet~ i wouldn´t wear a helmet while eating~ just liek the katars... they´d bugger me to much xD

i love the 5th panel though xD I´m so... me XD
but... who´s the hey dimi one? oh and, does dimidium actually like beeing called dimi?

questions over questions~ xD
I´m so unprepared!! XP

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*Reveta Jan 14, 2008, 2:16:01 AM
nice what did you use to the backround? it looks like water color almost
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=Luna-Minura Jan 14, 2008, 3:29:19 AM
nice! You've been acceppted in SDL ! Congrats :3 :hug:

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~Akina-SA Jan 14, 2008, 3:33:52 AM
another reason to hate the page lol
the person saying the quote is one of *mandalorianjedi's characters, Kazuma which i was going for one of your suggestions being that both of us say hi then suddenly Megumi ends up attacking you (for reasons unknown) and in a restaurant too.
he doesn't mind being called Dimi couple of times but not so much because it makes him sound like a little kid even though he's seventeen.
and i'll remember to take off the helmet and katars next time too.

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~Akina-SA Jan 14, 2008, 3:36:22 AM
ok thank you for telling me that, i'll hopefully remember for the next time i draw a comic page.

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~Akina-SA Jan 14, 2008, 3:37:22 AM
i actually used copic markers for the background cause i didn't know what else to use.
and thanks

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~Akina-SA Jan 14, 2008, 3:38:04 AM
thanks, though i don't like this page so much.
so many mistakes on it!

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=Luna-Minura Jan 14, 2008, 3:41:30 AM
meh, who cares about mistakes, the majority of the time we, readers, don't find them, you do cauz you're the one who did the comic. But I (or We, maybe) don,t really care about little mistakes! And I don't see big mistakes in this comic ! ;):hug:

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